Hello, my name is Bren and today my reading group were focusing on a Olympian named Sam Dickson, which is actually one of our teacher's husband's brother, I found that kind of cool, we did some research on a site so we can finish our work, and this is Sam's profile. If you have any opinions and comments, leave them below, bye now.
Hi Bren. Thank you for posting your Writing graphic organiser about Sam Dickson on your blog. Anyone else might not know what this is about because you forgot to write a blurb telling your readers what this is, what you were learning about, etc. Remember our learning intention is always on your Writing slideshow. You have lots of facts about Sam Dickson but I can't see anywhere where you have told us what sport he plays. Think about what facts are most important to include.
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